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Stephen said sorry but I didn’t care. He was going to be sorry once I’d spoken to him. I had thought of something. I new it would make Stephen unhappy, but again, I didn’t care. I could see it in his face, he knew he was going to be humiliated. So I asked him.“so he saw you, but you didn’t him”“it was dark” he said“it was moonlight. You said it was moonlight.”“not then” he said“when?” I asked him.He replied with “when he saw me. When I didn’t see him”That answer. The weakness of that answer made my smile become even more narrower.“you weren’t really hiding were you?”“you were just hiding your face”He pleaded with me to go home.“you were just putting your hands over your face. So you couldn’t see. Like Milly playing hide-and-seek. Like a little baby.“

gemma s